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submitting this before i go to bed which should've been two hours ago but it'S FINE
i took another shot at a semi realistic style again, not sure about the colors but it was so relaxing hh
also this ---> www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cP26n… is honestly my favorite christmas song and i could listen to it for eternity ;;;;
i hope you all enjoy your holidays <3 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

What an astounding drawing!! I really love this piece. Very eye-catching, colorful, and EXTREMELY beautiful. The neon pops in the background add an incredible amount to the image. An extraordinary choice of lighting to say the least. However, I think you may have added one color too many; perhaps a yellow in place of the green to tie in the eyes with the other elements of the drawing. From an anatomical standpoint, the drawing is very good as well, so I'll be a bit nitpicky with the little things. Overall, you NAILED IT. However, the muzzle is a slight bit too square and long, and the way you highlighted the cheek almost makes it appear a bit puffy and lumpy. For a completely sideways position, the nose if a tad bit too far to the left and the ear closest to us might look more natural if it is moved up just a tiny bit. Lastly, in my opinion, the left side of our character here ought not to be highlighted as much, or maybe not even at all. I can see that you went fo a "surrounded by lights" feel, but I believe the drawing may have been slightly more effective without the tufts on the left side tinted with red and outlines in a darker color. Again, just nitpicky stuff. c: I'm crazy about the way you drew the eye!! Gorgeous. The outline around it really makes it realistic. Highlights on the right are just phenomenal, especially the chest floof. Gorgeous, marvelously done. I like the wistful emotion portrayed here. I'm not what to think of the lack of a defined mouth; on one hand, it's not quite anatomically correct, but on the other, the viewer has more freedom to interpret the feeling conveyed by this drawing. All in all, a fantastic and beautiful drawing. I gave you 5 stars for vision because you clearly were very inspired to draw this, and i can see your passion in every stroke. I took off a star for originality because to be fair, I have seen this vegas-light background many a time (though you pulled it off better than most I've seen!!) and a star and a half of for technique because of some little opinion problems. As for impact; bravo.